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Chasing shadows cast by clouds by ~Henry-Alda:iconHenry-Alda:





Chasing shadows cast by clouds:

At rare times within that perfect pause
     where soft sunset and twilight meet.
And our hillsides and the valley walls
     are drenched in red and gold and pink.

I find my mind goes a wandering
     enmeshed in Nature's old allure.
And has after clouds gone following
     seeking within the skies a door.


(That I once saw opened years before.)


Through a veil within an autumn sky
     I watched a cloud become a swan.
Which on purest wings of white did fly
     through doors of night and then was gone.

Or perhaps it was a silver ship?
     twas long ago I can't recall
Or understand this memory’s grip
     and longing that I feel, at all.

While looking West as twilight falls.
©2004-2009 ~Henry-Alda
:iconhenry-alda:

Author's Comments

This like a lot of my poetry is based on Tolkien's Middle-Earth. In this poem I made an attempt to bridge our two worlds. The narrator of this poem is in fact in our world, but haunted by a glimpse of the Faerie realm he was granted as a child. His heart is always seeking another glimpse.

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:iconkimbolaya:
Very nice. I don't know how to appropriately critique because I like it so much---great style. -thumbs up-

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"we can forgive a man for making a useful thing as long as he does not admire it. the only excuse for making a useless thing is that one admires it intensely. all art is quite useless."
-Oscar Wilde
:iconkitolia:
Hm, I believe this is one I read on your xanga? Not sure. Anyway, it flows really well. It seems if you form a mental image you can so clearly see Middle Earth but when you attempt to grasp it fully it disappears like smoke on the wind. Relates vaguely to a book I read. Excellent work. :)

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